PauseBreak said:
You really didn't explain how you want the story line set up so I'm going to start how I think it might look.
TERRAN PREQUEL: The Suck
On a remote planet not far from the Dominions arms, the colony, 'Strong Arm', lost communications with their sister stations. A group of technicians was sent out to the colony's outter fringe to reinforce satellite coms. A couple days later, and with no news or return of the technicians, a small band of marines are sent out on a rescue mission.
"Snow Bound"
Confederate Camp
Grnaki Prime
6:33 AM SCT, 12.21.2541
Mission Briefing
Terran Command Center: Adjutant
Good morning gentlemen, as you know a few of you a group of Confederate technicians are lost after a violent hailstorm knocked out power to our communication devices. They left of the moring of December 17th 2541 and were to return yesturday morning. They were suppose to head due north and about 46 clicks out. The commander has been unable to connect to our sister base roughly 90 clicks north-west of here to see if any of technicians reported in.
There was only one message recieved before complete contact was lost.
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Technician: Homer Stands
12.18.2541
Commander...*static*...we are nearing the...*static*...but there seems to be...*static*...storm...*static*...need to find...*static*...*static*...but there's this hole...*static...Skataski went...*static*...no ropes....*static*...*static*...dead...*static*...*static*
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There will be two teams sent out. The first team with 4 members will head towards our sister colony and determine if they need any assistance and if out techs reported in.
The second team with 6 men will sub group into 3's. You will travel towards the sattillite uplink and search for the missing techs.
Good luck and travel safe.
END
i have to say that was really elaboate
but that doesnt mean i dont like yours fallen shadow
and i didnt really specify so that you could be imaginative and make up whatever
PauseBreak said:
Aren't we suppost to pick up where the other person left off?
hm...i dont think i really specified this either... but the general idea was to use other ppls ideas if you think it had a good strt or if you found something that you really like from it
and i feel really at fault for not bolding or underlining or doing something to the key parts of my initial post

but i have a change...if you want ppl to continue your story, you put a "CONTINUE..." in caps at the end of your post
if you dont, then you should tail a "THE END" at the bottom of your post
now im going to revise my initial post, so if you want to recheck the guidelines, you may i suppose
MY ADDITION TO THE STORY:
FaLLeN_ShadoW said:
Well...
I'm not much of a writer but...
Project 'Hybrid' Logs
Quote:
Originally Posted by Log 024
I don't know what's happening, but ever since the Protoss showed, the specimen known as 'Claw' has been growing at a very unusual rate lately... when we had started the project he was the size of a mere Zergling... he's grown three times the normal rate over all of the other specimens.. I fear that if he keeps growing.. we will have to put him down. We can't transfer him to a larger chamber because he is too delicate and he would surely die. I don't know what to do...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Log 029
Three days have passed since my last log, he begins to grow at the same rate.. I fear he does not break the chamber.. oh my..
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Originally Posted by Log 036
Something happend today.. As I was inspecting the specimens
I noticed that 'Claw' was a more distorted color than all of the other specimens.. I went over to look at him... as I watched him.. his arms started to move in strange directions... I don't understand! It isn't possible! And when I expected his chamber closer... it had been cracked! I immediately told Duran and he says that we will get rid of it tomarrow, I moved it to a special holding cell, well guarded. I don't know why he guarded it so heavy.. I am extremely concerned...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Log 042
This.. Oh my god I don't know what to think.. I'm so afraid.. Today I was walking with Duran to put the creature down and when we got to the door to the main chamber.. It wouldn't open! Duran put in the access code over and over again.. It was jammed... But what made me afraid was the noises we heard inside. We heard gunshots, loud painful screaming! We kept on trying to open the door buy Duran made me immediately make this log incase something.. happend.. I am so scared..
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Originally Posted by Log 043
This will be my final log.. God, if I make it past this day I will not work here any longer! As Duran and I continued to try to open the door, we finally got it! But inside.. they guards.. were torn apart. Looked as if they suffered terribly, they died with their eyes open and wide. We looked a little more.. We found a wall, completely destroyed.. but this couldn't have been done with anything like gernades! No! It was done by a strange pair of hands. I am positive it was in fact 'Claw'. His chamber was broken wide open, 'Claw' was missing.. Once Duran finally gathered some troops we continued through the hole following the strange tracks. We continued into a dark tunnel, on the side of the tracks we saw tubes and needles, the very ones that we inject into the specimens! The tunnel strangely led back into another room, across the room was another hole to the outside.. Once we went outside.. we saw a very horrible sight.. The specimens were everywhere! I don't understand! They were brutalizing all of the marines. I immediately was told to run. I am hiding in a lab room.. I don't know how long I will survive.. if all...
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Originally Posted by The Final Transmission
I think I might have been discovered! Please! Whoever has recieved these logs come to the 'Duran Expidition' site immediately! For god's sakes help me! I hear banging on the walls and door.. I don't know how long I can survive.. help.. me..
Technician: incoming transmission general
Raynor: play it...
---technician replays distress call---
Raynor: where did you say this was sent from?
Technician...ah...i believe it was on the surface of...
Technician #2: general raynor...a report from altanis
Raynor: (to Technician #1) set the course to the planet
(to Technician #2) play the message soldier
Artanis: good day general we have recieved reports from zeratul and his band of dark templar about a hidden project by the codename of CLAW. we know that it is run by duran and is a mix between races...
Raynor: god damn...you mean like a terran zerg?
Artanis: yes...the troubling news is a transmission was recieved stating that CLAW has taken Duran and his team of captive terrans...here is Durans coded message...
Samir Duran said:
Encrypt key:*********
Decode Key:******
Gentlemen...as you have realized, our project CLAW, has broken loose and raided our labs. The species, now classified as the Lemorte, have invaluable information on the terran history, the protoss and their weapon development, and the zergs ability to morph any harmless species to a figure for the overmind. surprisingly, the lemorte react to psi emiters as the zerg do, but at a more frenzied rate, and much quicker, even when equipped with the dampeners, hypothecially due to the massive intelligence these beasts posess. they learn quickly and even now, they forge a bond amongst themselves, creating castes, and forming under one chief leader...douns familiar artanis? or is it more like the humans primitive life before they grew any intelligence at all? the Lemorte have all of the obvious strengths of all three races and none of the weaknesses. i have managed to lockdown several of them because i have equipped them with suits that all ow themselves to be treated as machines and lockdownable. however, their numbers still overwhelm us...static...static...familiar voice screaming for mercy against the lemorte...silence
Raynor: well ill be damned...
Artanis:...these creatures ae more formidable than i could have possibly amounted from zeratuls messages...
Technician #2: transmission from the queen of blades, kerrigan
Raynor: (sorrowful loook passes through eyes; covers up quickly) transmit
Kerrigan:so i am to guess that youve aquired the data that duran foolishly sent everywhere?
Artanis: that is none of your business you...
Kerrigan: relax...ive seen those beasts too you know...after all this message could be a trap
Raynor: let me guess...you want our help to destroy the strongest race in the galaxy so that you can dominate and kill us all
Kerrigan

sarcasm) actually--
Artanis:what makes you think we will say yes?
Kerrigan:the zerg hive is vast and bountiful...before we exhaust ourselves of resources, you will fall out first...the lemorte is obviously much stronger than all of us combined. and as duran stated, they have all of our strengths but none of our weaknesses. therefore, they are easilyu made, costing little to no resources, are extremely strong, and can evolve quickly. for all we know, they could have all the information they need to rule the galaxy for...hm...i dont know...the next millenia?
Raynor:...how do we know that youre right and this is a trap...? you could be in on it too
Kerrigan: nonesense...the lemorte have alrdy attempted an attack on one of our colonies and they near wiped us out...they ar e much more advanced than us or you
Raynor:then i guess its off to meet this menace head to head...
CONTINUE